
“Yes, I see the path,” I said
“But I don’t follow rules
Instead, I choose to weave among
The wooden, leafy jewels.“
Removing shoes, I step upon
Green carpet, lush and cool
Walk carefully, with reverence
The trees know I’m no fool.
“Yes, I see the path,” I said
“But I don’t follow rules
Instead, I choose to weave among
The wooden, leafy jewels.“
Removing shoes, I step upon
Green carpet, lush and cool
Walk carefully, with reverence
The trees know I’m no fool.
I mean it, too – right on lofty theme, accurate rhyme, impeccable meter… Really a top notch piece of work.
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I’m humbled, this coming from you, my fave poet! ❤️
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Wow! Excellent!
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